Dude theres a lot of hurting people in the world so people can totally dig the lyrics of this song on a sunny day…even fiend for them. Dude I just checked your myspace and you are sooo talented man…truly a real musician! The only thing I feel like isnt up to par is your vocals man…you go for a sound that matches the music but your voice just doesnt pull it off…you have the effort but not the right voice…I bet if you tried singing different you’d nail perfection. Great stuff!
actually this is one of the best original songs i’ve heard on youtube. of course you’re not able to make it really shine here, but i can hear there’s something in it. great chord progressions and a strong melody. would like to hear it with a pro arrangement and everything.
LOVELUNA1369
January 4, 2015 at 7:38 amU r amazing ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Jonathan Siem
January 4, 2015 at 8:35 amjamlimited3 and anyone else who is interested, 2 years later,
http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/jonathansiemandwesclarya
Maybe someday I can actually get enough money, doubtable, to record more.
Otherwise, I’m always playing my guitar and making original songs.?
Jessica Robb
January 4, 2015 at 9:11 amYou’re very original. I love it! ?
jamlimited3
January 4, 2015 at 9:48 amDude theres a lot of hurting people in the world so people can totally dig
the lyrics of this song on a sunny day…even fiend for them. Dude I just
checked your myspace and you are sooo talented man…truly a real musician!
The only thing I feel like isnt up to par is your vocals man…you go for a
sound that matches the music but your voice just doesnt pull it off…you
have the effort but not the right voice…I bet if you tried singing
different you’d nail perfection. Great stuff!
Littleelfbailey
January 4, 2015 at 10:21 amI have 68 original songs. I should probably upload them,huh?
ArnoldwilliamDow
January 4, 2015 at 10:54 amI use the exact same proceedure. Over years of trial and error I found it.
Check out my page.
Elliot Brown
January 4, 2015 at 11:14 amI like your advice about using gibberish before coming up with the final
lyrics. It’s a good trick!
bjarnyg
January 4, 2015 at 11:31 amactually this is one of the best original songs i’ve heard on youtube. of
course you’re not able to make it really shine here, but i can hear there’s
something in it. great chord progressions and a strong melody. would like
to hear it with a pro arrangement and everything.